Senin, 27 Oktober 2014
He is a president director in my course, his name is mohammad ridwan gani. He is fourty five years old. He lives in sidoarjo. His hair is curly and he has black hair. He is average weight and short. He has big mole in his face. He is really hard working and good people because when his patner worker give some mistake, He always forgives. in the morning he always teach in elementary school but in the afternoon he teach in his course. He lives in housing estate. he does not comfortable to live there because it is very hot, so he want to move to the other place maybe in village.
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Ria...maybe "his hair is curly and he has black hair" maybe you can write : he has curly and black hair.. :)
BalasHapusRia...maybe "his hair is curly and he has black hair" maybe you can write : he has curly and black hair.. :)
BalasHapus1,,his patner worker give (gives) some mistake, he always forgive(forgives)
BalasHapus2,,,in the morning (,) he alwaus (always) teach (teachs) in elementary school(,) but in the afternoon(,) he teach (teachs) in his course.
3,,,he does not comfortable (comfort) / (he is not comfortable) to live there (,)
4,,,he want(wants) to move to the other place maybe (can change : which is) in village.
:) don't surrender,,,
good people= good person
BalasHapusi don't understand the sentence " when his partner worker...."
BalasHapusbut, if i may correct it,it become "when his partner in work....."